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In the March 1972 issue of Analog Science Fiction--Science Fact, Larry Niven had a short story, Cloak of Anarchy, part of his sprawling, thousand-year history of Known Space. I read the story as a kid, then came back to it several times as I appreciated more and more of its meaning.

The story itself centers on an Anarchy Park, a place where almost anything goes. The ever-present copseyes - floating observers that pack a powerful stunner - keep the peace. In theory, anything goes in an anarchy park. You can demonstrate, create art, tear down art, sing, dance, do whatever you want to so long as you don't cross the line into causing harm to another person or the park itself. This works fine until one of the characters in the story figures out how to disable to copseyes.

What happened next is a lesson in human nature as seen by Larry Niven. Disabling the copseyes also had the effect of locking the gates to the park. Everyone is trapped inside. Within hours, power structures form. A group of jocks seizes control of the only water supply. Other groups huddle together for safety or warmth. The story ends with the copseyes being restored and everyone leaving under their watchful gaze.

Like many of Niven's stories, the lesson is ham-handed and brutal "society good, anarchy bad." In general, I agree. But I'm currently read a book, Radical Ritual: How Burning Man Changed the World
by Neil Shister, that makes me think of that story and how it relates to Burning Man.

If you've never been, Burning Man is a place of creation. You, no matter how small, are part of the creation. Some people bring huge artworks, some bring mutant vehicles, some -like your humble narrator - bring stories to tell. Buty we all take part. There is also an amazing amount of pure liberty. Want to walk around naked but for an elaborate brass crown? Go for it. Juggling while reciting Greek poetry? I'd love to see it. Teach a class on cuneiform and let everyone make their own prayer? I'm still pissed I missed that.

But just underneath the surface, churning away, are the copseyes of Burning Man. The Black Rock Rangers, the various police agencies, and the social contract we all agree to without words when entering. Because what strikes me about Burning Man when compared to the Anarchy Parks of Niven's vision is that society forms without compulsion.

We don't need an absence of authority to form societies. We had that happen in 1996. That was the beginning of the rules that created a framework for radical self-expression. Ordinances were put in place to create more safe zones, places where the noise wasn't incessant, rules for mutant vehicles were established and evolved.

But what surprised the organizers was the growth of camps and villages. Camps are easy. Groups would band together to do something; support a mutant vehicle, run a bar, host live music, whatever. These groups would stay in contact all through the year, making plans and assigning jobs. Their growth really, in my opinion, made Burning Man a society. Camps then formed into villages, camps that worked together to make sure that Burners got the maximum interaction with their competent camps.

The organization had nearly nothing to do with this until it became a reality.

While admittedly the Anarchy Park in Cloak of Anarachy was designed for day visits, and Burning Man is a week in an unforgiving desert that will kill you, you can see where Niven almost predicted it.

If only we could get Larry out there.
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We now have access to Disney+ and I decided to enjoy Star Wars. Damn, I hear that music and I'm 11 again. Plus, having seen Rogue One the first few lines of the scroll are more poignant.

For all that it is still awesome after all these years, they have the "Lucas fucked with everything" version. Most of it was tolerable, with a few exceptions.

Han shot first.

In one scene on Tattoine, the camera is suddenly blocked by one of the giant CGI lizards walking past. There is no reason for this to happen. It adds nothing to the shot and indeed draws attention to the fact that we are watching the action through a camera.

Finally, the entire sequence between Han and Jabba in the landing bay. Way back in 1977, Lucas cut the scene as the Jabba puppet was terrible, and reshot the Cantina scene to give Greedo Jabba's lines. Dropping the Jabba scene back into the movie means we get the exact same dialogue in two scenes less than ten minutes apart.

Annoying.

But still, it's Star Wars, and I enjoyed being 11 years old and on the edge of my seat again.
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I'm cleaning out old files in preparation for the new computer and the brain transplant. I kind of like this one.



“Brother! Come quickly, our sister has found something and we must go see!” Brother looked from where he had been piling stones. Big Sister was at the top of the bluff, hands on hips, looking down expectantly. “Come quickly!” she shouted before turning abruptly and walking away. Abandoning the half-finished fort, Brother began limping up the slope. “I am coming,” he said to no one in particular, “but I cannot move too quickly because of my knee.”

Little Sister was on the south beach, not far from the shelter the children had erected long ago. By the time Brother made it, Big Sister was already listening to Little Sister's tale. “I was looking for my bear. I thought he might be on the beach because bears like fish. So I came to look and found this.” Little Sister pointed to a clump of seaweed that had washed up. There was a white ring tangled up in the plants, along with something lumpier. The trio moved closer to inspect the find.

“The ring is a life-ring. People on boats used them to help them swim.” Big Sister looked at the mass of seaweed closely. “There is a body in the ring. He must have fallen off a boat and his people couldn’t rescue him. Bodies are dirty and we shall not touch these things.” After several minutes Brother spoke up. “I think he was a pirate. He was thrown off his ship for not telling where his treasure was buried. We should hunt for the treasure and make swords to fight the pirates.”

Little Sister clapped her hands and said that sounded like a good game. Big Sister agreed that it was a good game so long as no one got too dirty. The discussion of pirate treasure was interrupted by the rumble of distant thunder. “Oh, the rain is coming! We need to go back to the shelter!” Big Sister declared, setting off with her determined stride. Little Sister followed, skipping merrily. Brother set off after them. “I am coming, but I cannot move too quickly because of my knee.”

The shelter was a large, tattered tent on the island’s highest hill. A fire pit held the long-dead remnants of a bonfire. Discarded tools and toys lay all around. The rain began as the children reached the top of their trail, passing the carefully constructed stone cairn at the edge of the encampment without a glance. Once in the tent, Big Sister looked around with a big smile on her face.

“What a good day we had! We all had fun, and we learned so many things! Just think! Tomorrow is a whole new day! Who knows what new games we’ll play! Now it is time for sleep. Goodnight!” At that Big Sister ceased moving, her eyes closed. Brother and Little Sister soon followed Big Sister’s lead. The next day the body and the life preserver were gone. No one ever mentioned them again.

The children continued in their routines. Brother planned for battles against pirates, Little Sister searched for her missing bear, and Big Sister chided them about the disgraceful state of their clothes, ignoring the fact that her clothing had all but disintegrated. Each night ended in the same way, in the tent with Big Sister telling them how wonderful tomorrow would be.

It was during one of the island’s periodic big storms that the pattern changed. The tent had developed several leaks. Big Sister and Brother were discussing repairs when Little Sister suddenly leaped to her feet and cried out “My bear!” Brother looked at where she was pointing. “Little Sister, I do not see your bear. Do you remember where you left it?” Little Sister ignored him, running out of the tent into the storm shouting “Bear!” over and over. Brother began struggling to his feet when Big Sister stopped him. “We cannot go after her in the dark. She will come back on her own, or we will look for her in the morning. “ That being settled, Big Sister announced it was time for bed.

The next morning dawned bright and clear with no sign of Little Sister. Big Sister decided that she would search the southern half of the island, while Brother took the northern half. Using a tree branch to steady his increasingly bad knee; Brother limped off, calling for Little Sister. He crisscrossed the island, checking meticulously for any sign of his missing sibling. It was while checking some sea-caves that his knee completely failed. Unable to keep his balance, Brother tumbled off the edge of a cliff and fell onto the sharp rocks. Seeing that he had been run clean through by one of the ricks, Brother opened his mouth and let out a piercing klaxon wail.

“Please help. I am an International Robotics Childhood Companion robot. I have been damaged beyond self-repair capabilities. I require immediate repair. I can access most phone systems for a toll-free call. “ Again, the klaxon. “Please help. I am an International Robotics Childhood Companion robot. I have been damaged beyond self-repair capabilities. I require immediate repair. I can access most phone systems for a toll-free call. . .” Brother continued to repeat his plea as the tide rose around him. When the tide receded, there was nothing but silence.

-

The clearing had almost returned to its wild state. The tent had long past blown away. What was left of Big Sister sat in the mud motionless. She came to life with a jerk, scaring off the birds that had been harvesting her hair for nesting material. She grinned with a half-frozen face.

“Wh-wh-what a good day we had!”
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Light of Impossible StarsLight of Impossible Stars by Gareth L. Powell

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Wow.

After reading Embers of War and Fleet of Knives my one concern wasn't if the third book would be good, but rather how Powell would tie everything up into a satisfying conclusion. I shouldn't have doubted, the climax of the novel is breathtaking in scope and execution.

I'm not going into too many details here, as all the action depends on knowing what happened in the previous books, but things have gone from potentially better to horrifically worse. The fate of civilization rests with the crew of the sentient warship Trouble Dog and a young woman who is the heir to a legacy no one could dream of.

So, it's space opera. Massively over-powered starships, sweeping vistas, big dumb objects, big not-so-dumb objects, space monsters. . . pretty much every trope is nailed. So why is it so much better than others of the same type?

Because it is a book about people. All of whom - sentient starships included - are weary and broken. There isn't a strong jaw or noble gleam of the eye in the bunch. Every single character in the trilogy is running from their pasts. Which makes see them confront the future all the more interesting. They screw up, sometimes in epic fashion. They are angry, hurt, desperate, broken people. And that's why I loved them so much.

There's no grand happy ending, although there is hope for one, and in a final epilogue-like chapter, Trouble Dog speaks a little about what happened after the climax of the book, which does bring things to a nice close.

One last thing, Gareth L. Powell has created my favorite alien species in decades in the Druff. Hexapodal natural engineers that evolved in the World Tree, a world-spanning example of megaflora that the Druff tend in a symbiotic relationship. The chapters written from the point of view of Nod, Trouble Dog's engineer, are brilliant examples of showing an alien mind at work.

A really fantastic end to a wonderful trilogy.



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Fleet of KnivesFleet of Knives by Gareth L. Powell

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Picking up shortly after the events in Embers of War, Fleet of Knives is definitely a middle book of a trilogy. But it's a very good middle book and does a great job of setting up the big finale in Light of Impossible Stars.

I'm not going to say too much about the plot, as I dislike spoilers, but the novel focuses on three main axes: the crew of a freighter who hope to make some quick money by plundering a derelict generation ship; the Trouble Dog and her crew, who go to rescue them; and Ona Sudak, who finds herself the human liaison to the Marble Fleet.

The action is fast and deadly, the characters are all interesting, and I'm invested in their fates, which means that Gareth L. Powell is doing a good job. Read Embers first, as this is not a standalone novel.

Chapter 49 may be the best chapter ever written.



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Embers of War (Embers of War, #1)Embers of War by Gareth L. Powell

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Let me put it this way: I'm really happy I bought the next book in the series at the same time I bought Embers of War because this is an amazing book.

Told entirely in first-person with each chapter focusing on a different character, Powell weaves a story of the crew of the Trouble Dog, a sentient former heavy cruiser who resigned to join the House of Reclamation, a rescue service that tends to attract cast-offs and people in need of rescue themselves.

When a passenger liner is mysteriously lost, the Trouble Dog and its crew are sent to rescue any survivors, picking up two burned-out intelligence agents along the way. Among the passengers on the liner is a renowned poet who is more than she seems.

This is a very human story. It's about people finding redemption, even the hybrid human/canine brain of the Trouble Dog has some issues. Once at their target, all the characters discover secrets that could bring peace to the galaxy. . . . or set it on fire.

Tightly writing, with characters you really get to know and cheer for, even as you learn their secrets, and everyone is tied to a war crime that happened in the past. A great read, and the follow-up, Fleet of Knives, has moved several places up on my to-read pile.



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Shadow CaptainShadow Captain by Alastair Reynolds

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


A solid sequel to 2016's Revenger, Shadow Captain is an almost noir-pirate thriller, as the Ness sisters, now the unwilling captains of the pirate ship Revenger, find themselves in dire need of supplies and crew while understanding that the very sight of their ship will likely provoke a violent response.

This is a book about secrets, both grand and personal. To explain any more of the plot would give things away, so I'll stop there. But as always Reynolds weaves brilliant storytelling with detailed worldbuilding. He paints vivid pictures of the dismantled solar system 10 million years i=from now, and does a wonderful job of make it a place of intrigue, adventure, and where danger lurks around every corner.

One thing, this is not a good standalone novel. It is a direct sequel to Revenger, and you need t read that book first to understand what is happening in Shadow Captain



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Between the RiversBetween the Rivers by Harry Turtledove

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


A fun read by the master of alternate history. The setting is the dawn of civilization, where every city has a patron god. Sharur, the protagonist, is the sone of a master merchant. Times are good for Sharur, he's about to marry his love, profits are high, and he is lucky to live in Gibil, whose god, Engibil, is lazy and lets men rule themselves.

This has resulted in Gibil being a leader in new ideas like writing and bronze working. Other gods are jealous, but things get bad when Sharur leads a trade caravan and learns that now the mountain gods have forbidden all trade with Gibil. Now Sharur has to scheme against the gods themselves to lift this embargo and marry his true love!

I loved this book, especially for the picture of how people lived "between the rivers" in ancient Mesopotamia. Magic is subtle, wits are favored over brawn, and Turtledove does a nice job or portraying an era on the cusp of a major change.

Runequest players should read this one. The setting is pretty close to Glorantha.





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Chell was in the nursery when they finally came for her. It was a relief, as she was far too old for the children's games and instructor sets. She sat silently, as always, watching as the cartoon animals in the holographic walls cavorted and tried to entice her to interact.

“Chell! Do you want to play a counting game?” asked an out-of-focus blue elephant in a deep voice. The fact was she was mastering calculus in her tutoring sessions, but the nursery didn’t know that, nor did it understand that Chell was only here because it was a convenient space to hide an unfortunate family matter.

She was the Captain’s eldest daughter. The Captain had two older sons, so she was not likely to inherit her father’s position. Once there had been three sons. Everyone was careful to call Piter’s death a “tragic accident” or a “terrible thing.” No one ever used the word assassination, not even to describe a young man found in a closet with his throat cut. Too many siblings meant potential struggles for the Captaincy.

Her father was nothing if not efficient. He would take steps to end that threat to a clean succession.

The blue elephant was stuttering now, stuck on the word “you” and increasingly out of focus. Another system failing, Chell thought. How many more until the Ship dies? The deep chant began to sound like it was mocking her.

There was a discreet cough. She turned her head and saw two of her father's personal Internal Security troops stood over her. “Are you here to see that I have a tragic mishap?” she asked brightly.

Both of the guards were unreadable behind their mirrored visors. “No, my lady Chell. We are to take you to the bridge to meet with the Capt . . . your father.”

Rolling to her feet with the grace and skill gained in endless hours of combat practice, Chell smiled at the guards, enjoying how the visors reflected her pale face and cropped dark hair. “Well, then. Please take me to the presence of our Exalted Captain!” One guard leading, the other falling in behind, they left the nursery.

One of the nursery attendants who had overheard the exchange sagged in relief as Security left with their charge. “Thank God, she’s gone! I hope she never comes back, girl gives me a creepy feeling.”

The other looked shocked. “Are you insane? Talking like that in a room filled with officers’ children? Do you want IntSec to take you to Level 87? Shut up and go see if Technical Services can fix that panel. It’s getting on my nerves.”

The blue elephant continued its monotonous repetition of “you . . . you . . . you . . .” for several hours until the wall panel finally failed and went dark. No one came to repair it.
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Storm Front (The Dresden Files, #1)Storm Front by Jim Butcher

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Now, this was a lot of fun and a great example of world-building that shows in the story without needing to see the details of how everything works. I'll be hitting the library for the next books in the series very soon.

Harry Dresden is a wizard living in Chicago. Barely making a living as a magic private investigator in a world that kind of accepts magic, Harry depends on a consulting gig with the police, like any good PI in a mystery novel, Harry is grizzled, desperate, and hungry.

So when he catches a consulting job on a magical murder the same day a distraught wife shoves money at him to find her missing husband, Harry thinks his luck is changing. Of course, he's wrong. Instead, he gets caught up with the mob, an angry vampire, and a shadowing mage who is somehow doing the impossible. All of whom want Harry either dead or out of the picture. Oh, and he's being pursued by a fanatical enforcer from the White Council who is just itching to execute him.

I have an unabashed love of noir mysteries and urban fantasy, and I'm amazed that it has taken this long to find this series. Dresden is both a detective in the grand footsteps of Philip Marlowe and Lt. Columbo; a bit misanthropic but a dogged investigator. He's very human in that the damage he takes through the book lingers, and he's not an iron man, which makes him relatable. Add a strong supporting cast and great writing, and I'm hooked!



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Credit for the first line goes to my cousin Pam, who used to describe how she felt with the flu. I have no idea where I'd go with this piece, but my writing group loved it. Let me know what you think.

Untitled Story Fragment #4

I woke up feeling like a leftover bag of gear and crappy food from backstage at a 1984 Ozzy concert. Summoning every milligram of energy I cracked open an eyelid. The searing white light caused my brain to explode and left after images of happy unicorns shitting rainbows. In an act of self-preservation, I managed to roll over. Which left me face down in the slightly damp carpet.

The thought of being found dead in this position was just humiliating enough for me to drag myself up into a loose lotus on the floor. I took some stock of my surroundings. Obviously, I was in a cheap but functional long-term hotel rental. The couch I was leaning on folded out into a bed; there was a maker unit showing 45% of the base block remaining, a small cleaner, and a sonic shower. There were also several empty pizza boxes and multiple empty bottles of soju, some smashed, littering the place. Add in the depleted medical kit and bloody bandages, and it seems I had quite the weekend.

But why couldn't I remember it? Even my chipped memory was wiped. My biofeed showed that in the last 72 hours I had been extremely active early on, then nearly comatose for close to two days. My locator put me in Los Angeles' Koreatown, which explained the soju. I needed answers, but first, some personal care.

Regretting every move, I got to my feet and stripped. The blood-splattered jeans and shirt went into the maker's bin. As did the socks and panties. The boots I woke in were really nice, so those went into the cleaner for a deep scrub. The bra deserved to be burned as biological waste, but it got fed to the maker. Then all the trash and broken glass. The maker happily hummed as it tore all that crap down to atoms and stored them.

Now me. I marched straight into the shower and set it to a deep clean cycle. On impulse, I also set a full hair removal. Ten minutes later, I felt as human as I get. The shower had even polished my right arm, bring out the highlights in the chrome work.

One more thing. I raised my arms and stood in the center of the shower. "Scan me for clothing, and send the results to the maker as Pam0311." I stood as still as I could until the shower chirped that it was finished. It was only when I stepped out of the shower did I notice the words written on the small mirror over the sink. Written in my own lipstick in my own hand.

DON'T ASK QUESTIONS
YOU GOT PAID A LOT TO FORGET
YOU WOULDN'T LIKE THE ANSWERS

That shook me. I called up my banking info and whistled. 250,000 Gold Bruins had been deposited two days ago. I recognized it as my standard fee for a political hit job. GB's were a strong, stable currency, backed by hard tech. What the hell had I done? Was the memory wipe voluntary? Or was it done without my consent? No, far easier to just kill me, the usual fate of an assassin.

I needed food to focus. The maker produced really good huevos rancheros and breakfast potatoes, along with a nice cold glass of tomato juice. While eating, I began looking at my security implants and their reports. Physically, I was fine, except for one gunshot wound to the leg that had already been tended to by a professional. My bike was outside, and one moron was off suffering from 24-hour Ebola for trying to mess with it. All my firearms reported green. A self-systems check revealed no malfunctions or invasive software.

Tummy filled, I used the maker to order up some good, rugged clothing. I was going to be charged for every gram of base matter I used over what was there when I checked in, which was one reason to dump all my trash there: build up the account. As I waited for the machine to work its magic, I turned on the wallscreen to catch up on the news.

And nearly lost my breakfast. Still dominating the headlines after three days was the brutal murder of the Governor of Los Angeles and his family in their home. Along with pretty much the entire security detail and the Governor himself, the dead included his wife and their five children. As I watched the pirated police camera videos, I recognized this as my work. I did this.

But kids? I never kill kids, I never kill family members. My rules are clear: I take out targets of value and anyone who tries to stop me. I am a dagger in the night, not a freaking car bomb. Yet somehow I was talked into doing this or blackmailed, and then agreed to be mindwiped and allowed to live. Nothing made sense.

But there was one thing I was sure of. The Pacific Coast Alliance was not safe for me. I was already dressing, throwing my other new clothes into my go-bag, and putting on my pretty new and now very clean boots.

Finally, before I dropped a Kleen-All bomb to erase my DNA from the place, I smashed the mirror bearing the message for my traitorous self. I will ask questions, I will learn the truth, and when I find out why this happened, God help the people who made me do this.
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Tiamat's Wrath (The Expanse, #8)Tiamat's Wrath by James S.A. Corey

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


What a freaking ride! Set "a couple of decades" after the previous entry in the series, we find the crew of the Rocinante scattered. James Holden is a prisoner in a gilded cage; Naomi, Bobbie, and Alex are trying to hold a struggling underground together; and Amos is missing, presumed dead, after a failed mission to the Laconian capital.

A big theme here is Messing With the Unknown. Laconian science is treating the Gatebuilders technology as free pickings while acting as if the unknown force that exterminated the Gatebuilders is an enemy to be dealt with. This hubris drives the plot in several places, as the unintended consequences of Laconian actions rewrites the strategic situation. It all comes down to who can adapt faster.

I felt that the jump in time was a great move, as it allows the setting to be advanced without the need for tedious backstory. So that when we do join the plot, things are about to get rolling! And roll they do, with intrigue, palace politics, some pretty good horror, and a colossal space battle that takes your breath away. There are heroic sacrifices, reunions, good-byes, and new beginnings. Then the epilogue sets us up for what is going to be a real battle in Book 9.

Amazing stuff, as always.



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Persepolis Rising (The Expanse, #7)Persepolis Rising by James S.A. Corey

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Pick up a few decades after the end of the last book in the series, we start with the long-standing crew of the Rocinante breaking up. James Holden and Naomi want to retire. Everyone agrees and a plan is made for financial settlements. Hugs all around. End of book.

Not. Because before James and Naomi can leave Medina station for Earth, the gate to Laconia, who had shut themselves off from the rest of humanity opens, and out come warships far beyond anything ever seen. Unwillingly, the crew of the Roci finds themselves once again called upon to lead the fight.

What can I say about the Expanse novels that hasn't been said before? The characters all have depth, even the bad guys have motivations and feelings beyond being plot points. There's one Laconian character who you really feel sorry for as he stumbles through his job knowing the fate that awaits failures in the Empire.

Obviously, you need to read the six previous books to understand this one. If you haven't done that, what are you waiting for? These books are a brilliant mix of space opera, political thriller, hard science fiction, and Clarkesian alien tech.

Get reading!



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Terminal Uprising  (Janitors of the Post-Apocalypse, #2)Terminal Uprising by Jim C. Hines

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


The saga of Marion "Mops" Adamopolus and her crew of hygiene and sanitation specialist cum space rebels continues! Picking up several months after the events of Terminal Alliance, we follow the crew of the EMCS Pufferfish as they travel to a space station inside a space-going whale to meet a most unlikely ally and undertake a mission almost unthinkable: visit the most savage, untamed planet in the known galaxy. Earth.

The action is fast-paced and fun, the humor is constant but rarely in your face, and these are characters you grow really fond of. For a fairly humorous SF book, there are moments of real sadness and loss, and they all work together. This is such a fun and good read, I literally finished in a day of good reading.

You could jump in here and not lose too much, as there are enough references to the first book to make the plot understandable, but I really recommend reading Terminal Alliance first.

I can't wait for the next book in the series. Really good stuff.



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On the 6th of October, 1995, the world learned that we were not alone. No, the aliens hadn't shown up, but the first confirmed planet orbiting another star was found. 51 Pegasi b, orbiting a star roughly 50 light years away, changed how we saw the universe.

Because astronomers had been saying for centuries that there was no reason for other stars not to have their own family of planets. But until we found evidence, it was still just a hypothesis. But once we found that first planet, the flood gates opened. Observatories began confirming dozens, then hundreds of "exoplanets" orbiting other stars. Orbital observatories like TESS (Transiting Exoplanet Survey Satellite) are finding more every day. To date, we've confirmed nearly 4,000 planets orbiting other suns.

But there are a few problems for the science-fiction fan dreaming of colonies on strange new worlds. Of these 4,000 worlds, only a tiny fraction might be habitable. Many are super-Earth, much larger and more massive, which would indicate much higher gravity than Earth's 1g. Imagine living on a world where the force of gravity is three times stronger. You weight three times as much, and falls would be bone-shattering. You'd also be breathing air that was thick as soup assuming there was any free oxygen there to begin with. Other worlds have similar issues. So close to their stars that their year lasts less than a week and the sunward face would be molten, or so far out that they are ice-encased balls of dead rock. Not very inviting.

Add in that getting anywhere is a daunting prospect. Our closest neighbor, Proxima Centauri, is 4.244 light years away. That's 2.49489x10^13 miles. Unless we turn everything we know about physics on its head and find a way to cheat lightspeed, getting anywhere is going to be a slog. There is an "effective" speed limit of about 40% of the speed of light with the technology we have now. Any faster, and you start to have real problems with both relativistic effects (your ship gets more massive as it approaches the speed of light) and the random bits of dust and hydrogen you hit start having the impact energy of atomic bombs.

That makes the trip to Proxima Centauri b take about 17 years (ship time, the trip feels a little quicker for those on board due to relativity) which means that that ship needs to be able to support both crew and colonists for a long time. These are known in science-fiction as generation ships, Huge vessels built to carry thousands and support them with a functioning ecosystem. These ships have to be built to last because as the name implies, generations will live and die before the ship reaches its destination. For example, the closest candidate for a twin to Earth is Kepler-186f, which is 500 light years away. With our .4c speed limit, getting there is going to take 2,271 years, ship time. For reference, 2,271 years ago, Ptolemy II Philadelphus was king of Ptolemaic Egypt.

Which raises the question, after untold generations in space, living in an enclosed world, would the settlers choose to leave the home of their families for untold generations to settle a new world? What kinds of cultures would evolve on these ships? Given centuries, it's quite possible that any given generation ship could experience the same cycle of rising and falling, with new religions, new languages, even the possibility that over time the population forgets they are on a ship at all and see the ship as their entire universe.

Even on shorter hauls, even if we figure out how to beat the problems of relativity, the journies are going to take a long time. Tau Ceti, long a favorite of science fiction writers because the star is a close twin to our sun, lies a mere 11.9 light years away. If our transport can boost at 1G acceleration (adding roughly 10m^2 velocity every second) and can make it to .99c, the onboard trip will take a bit over five years for those on the ship. But here's where things get fun. Relativity means that those 5.14 years on the ship happened while 13.7 years passed outside the ship. If you take the same ship from Earth to Kepler-186f, it gets much worse. You have 12 years onboard to practice saying "Hello, my name is" in Keplerian, but 501 years have passed in the non-relativistic universe, and the language has changed beyond recognition.

In this case, I think you would develop a caste of spacers who live their entire lives on their ships and pass through the centuries as ghosts, visiting colonized worlds for trade and passing information. British author Alastair Reynolds has written an entire series, called Revelation Space, around this idea.

Science fiction loves to break the rules. Faster than light travel, magic energy sources that can provide endless power with no input, and fantastic but plausible technologies. Larry Niven also played with the concept with his Léshy Circuit stories, where vast slower than light starships used magnetic scoops to feed their fusion drives with interstellar hydrogen. Sometimes, the story is more interesting with you don't break physics. I should try that.

All travel times were generated at the Relativistic Star Ship Calculator http://convertalot.com/relativistic_star_ship_calculator.html
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The book I'm working on is a grand political space opera drawn heavily from the life of Charles-Louis Napoléon Bonaparte, Better known to history as Napoleon III. He's an interesting guy, in a tragically doomed sort of way, and his career arc is ripe for the plucking.

So I'm doing this book in bits and pieces. I'm setting up a Scrivener file, doing my research, and setting up my major plot points. I know it's a mess of cliches, but here's the thing. I want to write a novel. I will self-publish it through Amazon or something, and when I hold it in my hands I will treasure it. If I end selling 15 copies to friends and family, so be it. I'm doing this so I can stand up and say that I write science-fiction.

Behind the cut is a pivotal scene. Alois Rohr, nephew of the deposed (and now deceased) Terran Emperor, is trying to start a coup. His agents have been hard at work subverting the command structure of the 3rd Fleet, making sure Rohrists hold the major commands. Alois has hired a squadron of mercenary destroyers to carry him to where the bulk of the 3rd fleet is stationed . . .

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Terms of Enlistment (Frontlines #1)Terms of Enlistment by Marko Kloos

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


If Robert Heinlein had been a grunt, he would have written this book. Very much in the style of the Grand Master, we follow out hero from his life in a dangerous public-housing warren, through Basic and onwards into his career. Much like in Starship Troopers, the recruiters are there to warn people off, and Basic training culls prospects vigorously.

During training, the hero falls in love with a fellow trainee and is crushed when she is assigned to the Navy, whereas he gets the Territorial Army, assigned to break shit right here on Earth. After a few rough deployments, he manages to get a transfer to the Navy. Which is when things get interesting . . .

I breezed through this book. It's mostly what I read Starship Troopers for when I was eight: cool Army life and battles. Don't expect long soliloquies on the morality of war or the duties of a soldier. This is Space Opera from the eyes of a grunt. I took a star off because Kloos never takes the time to show the banality of military life, cleaning a latrine, or, later in the book, manning a station where nothing happens for long hours. At one point our hero is assigned to a post that normally takes two people under the supervision of an NCO, yet there's never an "oh, I'm fucked" moment.

A lot of fun, and well worth reading. I just wish Kloos had taken a few pages to make his military less sterile.



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Trade 10

The habitat was called “Moderate Gravity, Moderate Oxygen, Moderate Water.” Which was fine as a guide to which of the Hub’s hundreds of cylindrical worlds would allow me to breathe and do other little life-sustaining things, but the O2 was just a little low, and the sun tube running down the center of the hollow cylinder was just a touch too bright.

But I wasn’t here to settle down. The Hub was where traders from across the Auzurach Empire came to do business. I was hoping to finally find a way back to Earth after far too long away. Even though the bazaar I had been directed to after some searching was crowded, I had no problem making my way through the narrow alleys between stalls and tents.

Maybe it was that humans are a bit bigger than most intelligent species. Maybe it was the military-grade prosthetics that had replaced my right arm and the right side of my head. There was a good chance that many of the aliens recognized the flames tattooed around my left eye and the short cutlass and dagger I wore as a sure sign that I was a Legionnaire, and not to be messed with.

Whatever the reason, I wasted little time finding the pavilion of one Su5tre3cath1, a merchant prince who was gathering cargo and crew for a trade fleet that was at least heading in my general direction. I stopped outside their stall to double check their Trade Language sign.

Along with being really good at conquering, the Auzurach were pretty good at running their empire. Long ago they create the Trade Tongues, constructed languages that allowed species to speak to each other. I could speak 49, 63, and 112, although that last one had a nasty accent. Luckily, the sign had the lips, tongue, and teeth symbol of Trade 49. Mustering my best “hire me” face, I stepped inside.

It took a second for my eyes to adjust to the tent’s dim interior. There were a handful of Kylean trade brokers seated on cushions working frantically on tablets, whistling to each other in what I recognized as Trade 15. At the back, a giant ball of snot was resting on a rock. Well, if snotballs had eyestalks and a forest of spidery arms.

While I was considering how I should address the snot, a voice speaking Trade 112 came from behind me.
“Do not speak to Su5tre3cath1, honored guest, he is of high caste, and it would be an insult.”
I turned and found myself facing an alien of a type I’d never seen before. At least nine feet tall, humanoid but with extra sets of elbows and knees and deep red skin that darkened to brown and black in places. Two golden cat eyes regarded me cooly.

“I didn’t mean any insult,” I said, switching to Trade 49. I bowed politely. “I am Franklin Hughes, formerly an Assault Band Sub-Leader in the 173rd Frontier Legion. I am looking for a working passage to my homeworld, Earth. I understand that the exalted Su5tre3cath1 is organizing a trade fleet.” I tried to sing the snotball’s name properly. I probably failed.

The big alien smiled, revealing a shark’s mouth of teeth. “I am Turridan, honored to be chief secretary to the exalted Su5tre3cath1, eclipsed only by the Great Emperor of the Auzurach!”
At that, we both bowed and said the prayer of praise. It was the safe thing to do, as you never knew when the Tavrchedl, the secret police, would be listening. Besides, praising the throne was a habit after so many years in the service.

“So, Franklin Hughes . . . are you a deserter? There is a bounty on those who flee the service of the empire.”

“Never! I served my time, 40 years, and I was discharged honorably. I have my discharge file for your inspection.”

It waved in dismissal. I noticed that the hands had four fingers and two opposable thumbs. “Very few live to see their release from the Emperor's service. It must have been hard, not seeing home for decades.”

“Centuries, actually.” Turridan’s eyes widened. “When a Legion isn’t needed it is put into stasis. I figure it has been 230 Imperial years since I saw home. That’s about 300 years in my calendar.” Turridan motioned that I should find a seat on one of the cushions then folded its legs into a cross between the lotus position and macrame.

“Working passage. What can you do for the exalted Su5tre3cath1? Why are you willing to labor for just food and a sleeping berth?”

“Obviously, I can work as a security officer. Beyond that, 40 years in service means I’ve picked many skills in repairing machines and electronics. I can fly most standard small craft, up to a cargo shuttle.” I spread my arms wide. “Take me as I am, and I will perform any task given to me.

“As to why I need to travel working passage, my accumulated pay was lost in a bank crash. Waiting for the paymasters to recover the data may take years. Rather than wait, I jumped the first ship that would take me. I cannot pay the guild fee to become a full crewmember, so I find any means I can to make my way between the stars.”

Again the smile. “Leave your data with me. I shall consult the exalted one and his captains. Wait for my call. There is one thing, the exalted Su5tre3cath1 requires that the final contract be negotiated in Trade 10 and he must be present to witness. You may leave now.”

I hastily agreed and scrambled to my feet and exited the pavilion, blinking a few time in the bright sunlight. I had my ride, probably, but I had never even heard of Trade 10. When I asked around in the bazaar, all I got was laughter and hoots of derision.

--

The one nice thing about an artificial world is they announce the time and duration of rain well beforehand. So I was able to sleep the next two nights in a park and remain relatively dry and comfortable. Charity kitchens kept me fed. I spent a handful of dwindling hoard of credits to do a data search. What I found made me twitch.

TRADE 10: Trade language using the passing of genetic material from one sentient being to another. Usually involves sexual acts or erotic stimulation. Information density low, Effectiveness low. Not recommended for negotiations.

So when I got a message telling me to come back to the pavilion when the sun tube dimmed, I was damn close to panic. I’d faced death a thousand times in the Legion, but contractual sex with a big red alien with too many joints? This was something new.

With my usual perfect timing, I arrived just as the sun tube went dark and the only light was the constellations made by the city lights on the other side of the cylinder. Steeling myself as if I was getting ready to drop into a combat zone, I marched in. If the tent was dim in the day, it was dark as pitch at night.

“Welcome, Frank Hughes.” Turridan’s voice growled like a big cat. I turned my artificial optic to low light mode, and my jaw dropped. Turridan was seated in that impossible lotus. It was wearing something that looked to be a flimsy as tissue paper. And Turridan had breasts. Nice ones. I barely noticed Su5tre3cath1 on his rock.

I pointed. “You did not have those when we last met.”

She, I guess I had to call her she now, made a growl-click sound that I figured was laughter. “My race is what you call ‘sequential hermaphrodites.’ We change between our three genders almost at will. We’ve also mastered the ability to form our own bodies to a limited extent. This is why we had to wait, I needed to study and form.” She extended her hand to me. “Shall we begin?”

I needed no further encouragement. I shed my clothes like they were on fire and joined her on the cushions. Negotiations began in earnest.

--

I woke the next morning stiff and sore and utterly drained. Even my right arm was sending low power warnings. The previous night was a blur, but all things considered, I think I did the human race proud. I have to say it had been an acrobatic night, and oy, what she did with her teeth! I’ll have a new set of scars to go with combat related ones.

Beside me, Turridan stirred. She looked at me with her big cat eyes. “The negotiations are completed.” she purred. Lifting herself from the cushions, she looked to where Su5tre3cath1 was still oozing on his rock and sang to him. He sang back. Satisfied, she turned back to me.

“It is settled. You have been accepted as a crewman in the exalted one’s fleet. You will receive a small loan to buy appropriate gear.” She leaned in close and growled in my ear. “I shall see you assigned to the lead ship. I may keep this form. It has many . . . possibilities.” She then dragged those razor-sharp teeth over my shoulder while I quivered in ecstasy.

--

As it turned out, the closest the trade fleet would be coming to Earth was 720 light years, to a cold but habitable planet called Niflheim, which had a good-sized human colony. But I had changed my mind about Earth. Reading what was available in the ship’s library, I learned that Earth was still a defeated world, chafing under Imperial Auzurach rule. Screw that. Becoming a fisherman on Niflheim sounded far more interesting, especially when I learned that the “fish” were sea serpents that could reach 300 feet long and the serpents won the fight against the fishing boats about one time in five.

But first I had to get there, and that was going to take two long Imperial years. Being a contrary sort, I was eternally arguing my contract terms. Which meant Turridan and I had to renegotiate frequently. Always in Trade 10.
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Lock In (Lock In, #1)Lock In by John Scalzi

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


My timeline with Lock In:

1004hrs: Check out of Santa Clara Library Main Branch.

1020hrs: Arrive home, begin reading.

1310hrs: Break for ghost pepper cheese sauce and several cold beverages.

1524hrs: Finish book.

It's that good. A twisted mystery worth of Hammet or Christie, memorable characters, and a brilliant unveiling of hints and clues, all presented with Scalzi's usual wit.



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Nightflyers: The Illustrated editionNightflyers: The Illustrated edition by George R.R. Martin

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


I read this when it first came out in Analog, and the story still grips me today. A mysterious ship with a never-seen captain, filled with researchers chasing a legend. Then the deaths begin . . .

Nightflyers is a ghost story in space, brilliant in its crafting of the nine researchers and the enigmatic captain-owner. It's solid as a science-fiction story and equally stunning as a work of horror.



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