About the 500 Words posts.

[gridlore]

Part of the goal of the 500 Words concept is to help me polish my writing so I can get on with my goal of getting my fiction published. So while I love it when people tell me that they like what I write, I'm really looking for more. Specifically.

• If you liked it, what appealed to you?


• If you didn't, what turned you off?


• Dissect my writing style - call me on my bad habits, please!


• Likewise with spelling and grammar errors. Feel free to act like an English teacher.


• Seriously, tell me what works and where I'm lacking. I'm trying to exploit the collective minds that read my journal so my writing improves.

Thanks!