No Doug, this is an *outline*

[gridlore]

Redoing my Concordat outline, and I lust realized that the outline for the History chapter is reading more like the chapter itself! It's just more convenient for me to lay down all the ideas there.

I'll do a clean version for the submission, but this will remind me of what goes where.

Right now, I'm up through 2266, and the end of the colonies war with Earth and the acceptance of the Concordat by all parties.

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[kshandra]

I was noticing that when I was helping to reformat the doc, and did my damnedest to reduce a lot of those sentences to bullet points. 'cause, yeah - full sentences? Not so much in an outline.

hmmmmm

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