ext_726 ([identity profile] cmdr-zoom.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gridlore 2009-12-13 12:41 am (UTC)

A little too stretched out. I think you could do it in three, especially if you're cutting out most of the gratuitous wackiness.
Other than that, a fine outline.
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